Hi there! Thanks so much for inviting on your blog. What a great idea to have a blog for young writers. When I was growing up we didn't have blogs – we didn't even have computers! Can you imagine that? Yep, that was the olden days, where I rode around in a horse and cart (no, not really – we had cars by then) and everything I wrote was by hand. Sometimes I still prefer to write my stories by hand. I always carry a notebook with me because you never know when a good idea is going to come to you. My notebooks are full of ideas: things I remember from my childhood, drawings, snippets of conversations I may have heard, even cuttings from newspapers and magazines that interest me. Sometimes I might even begin a story in my notebook, then when I feel it begin to take shape, I'll begin to type it out on my computer. A notebook is a great place to practice your writing. Because, like everything, if you want to be good at something, what do you have to do? Yep, that's right – practice! Imagine if you were a runner and you turned up on race day to run your 100 metre sprint without having done any practice. You wouldn't do your best run, would you? Well, writing is just the same. The more you practice in your notebook, the more likely it is that when you do finally sit down at the computer, the ideas will flow. The more you write, the better you get at writing. Good luck! And have fun.

Best wishes,

Sally Rippin

www.sallyrippin.com

Tuesday, 25 June 2013


Noisy like thunder

A big digger

Floppy ears

Different sizes

Its flexible moves

Happiness giver

Loves its owner

Soft and rough fur

Cuddly like soft skin

It’s a dog

By Abigail
Kennings by billy souvlis

Ground glider

Small slackers

Slow sliders

Slim slimy trail

Fragile shells

Tiny nibbles

Back yard scavenger

Spiral shell

Anxious attacker
Silent slider
Dragon
Fire breather
Fire nightmare
Deadly fighter
Vicious beast
 
 
Dragon

Darkness terror

Sky horror

Toasted human

Fearless monster

Scary nightmare

Chinese devil

Sounds like a DRAGON
 
BY PHOENIX
 

It was raining

It was flying through the sky

Like a dash of thunder

It made the clouds so unhappy

So was I

But when the rain stops

It made me happy again to smile 

It is sad By Abigail
Happy
 
Happy is Yellow like the gleaming sun reflecting on the nice summer waves
 
It’s as tasty as the hot cheese melting in your mouth from the nice thick pizza
 
It smells as refreshing as a fresh forming daisy
 
It looks like candy falling from the multi-colour rainbow
 
It sounds like nice relaxing party music
 
It feels like a nice squishy marshmallow

by billy souvlis
 

Happy


Purple like ripe grapes

It taste like a sweet strawberry

 It smells like roses in a wedding

 It looks like it is a day with a rainbow in the sky

It sounds peaceful sitting in a daisy patch

It feels relaxing and sweet like a strawberry

Angry

Anger is red like gushing lava erupting from the ground

It’s hot like red chillies blazing on my tongue

It smells salty like the endless sea

It looks like a bushfire blazing out of control

It sounds deafening like a thunderstorm in the dead of night
It feels painful like the gravel under my feet.

By Declan A

Monday, 24 June 2013


Fear

Fear turns into disgusting red

Fear tastes like some vomit it does not make you feel good

Fear smells rotten almost like something has just gone off

Fear looks like an evil bully destroying innocent poor flowers

Fear sounds like a chainsaw endeavouring to cut vast pieces of metal

Fear feels like a fuzzy frightening fellow
 
By Dean P

maD
 
The black clouds are taking over me feeling fear inside. It then begins to get dark with heavy clouds and then it rains like no tomorrow. Then I have a shiver down my back. Still feeling nervous  as smoke pours out of my ears. I feel like I’m going to BURST with tears. Wanting to bolt  home but I can’t because it is pouring down rain but all of a sudden it starts to hail with a big bang bang bang!!!

By Julia Mercuri

Fearless devil
Violent flaming temper
Petrifying dark caves
Beastly scorching reptile
Deadly sharp claws
Horrified dreams
Vicious flight
dragon
 
 

Friday, 21 June 2013

Squishy mushy venaler
On the fire
Sizzling with sweet scent
Turning crispy crunchy brown
Toasting
Boasting sugar falling down
Powder sparkles reflecting gentle heat
Goi sticky melted
Makes my tastebuds dance
Succulent cheeky yummy
Snack
Sweet as candy
Sweet nice pink fluffy smooth white 
That great mash makes
                       Everyone smile                     
 
Marshmallow
 
By Dean P
Snake
 
Cautious mover
Deadly attacker
Scaly body
Sharp fangs
Unstoppable hunter
Incredible speeder
Unbelievable glider
Venomous seeker
Patient waiter
Fearless
 
By Jack M
 

Slithering murders,

Vicious hole demolishers,

Cautiously catching its preys,

Wild and beastly hiss,

Venomous biters,

Threatening defenders,

 Mischievous fangs.

 

It is a snake

By Sienna Seychell